Destiny's Calendar

Description

66 pages
$5.00

Author

Publisher

Year

1985

Contributor

Reviewed by Mary Ellen Miller

Mary Ellen Miller was a poet and Associate Professor of English at Western Kentucky University in Bowling Green.

Review

Metras’s long introductory poem, “Burning Instead of Beauty,” is a powerful piece, not always possible to follow. There is a great difference between ambiguity and vagueness in poetry and the leaps between stanzas in this poem are often merely vague.

All of the poems (mostly on domestic themes — children, first pregnancy, grandmother) are energetic, and it is very refreshing to see a man writing on home, love, and family and doing it with great tenderness.

One of the most striking poems (except for a weak ending) is “The Book of Smiles”:

When they returned from the asylum,
they pressed her infant smile
between the pages of memory.
And whenever the book of Martha opened
inside them, they recited
 
“We must forget her.
She’s better off where she is.
They can help her.
There will be other children.
God, forgive us.”
 
This too is the beginning.

This is the second poem in a series of 18 poems on Martha, who lived to be 102 — the last 98 years in an institution. Metras’s energetic metrics and marvelous lines like “whenever the book of Martha opened / inside them,” make the poems work even if they do sometimes seem to go on and on.

Citation

Metras, Gary, “Destiny's Calendar,” Canadian Book Review Annual Online, accessed November 22, 2024, https://cbra.library.utoronto.ca/items/show/35947.